Critic

What would I do differently if I had the time?

If I had the time then I would perhaps change the script. This is because I feel that it is too basic and simple. I would change it to something that lasted a little bit longer and perhaps gave it more depth. 

Similarly, I would re-take the deep shot when Harry has eye contact with Lauren because the camera turns the other way around. By doing this it would make it slightly more professional looking. 

Apart form that, I don't think that there is anything else that I would change. 

What did I like about the final product?

I really liked the slow motion section! I thought it worked really well and I loved the diagetic sound that went with it. It was so unexpected but worked really well in my opinion. Also, I thought that the slow motion really highlighted the attitude of each character and made it more believable and naturalistic. 

Also, I thought that the section when Harry was running away was comical and worked really well as it would appeal to the audience. Furthermore, I thought that the incidental music that accompanied it was very appropriate and also added to the comedic value!